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#1 Pogglemort

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 12:34 AM

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Can I have some feed back, some constructive critisism, whatever.

#2 Kpoc

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 02:55 AM

i ilke the BG but it is all a little dark nice concept though, the text could also do with some work maybe a differnt font with not so big a stroke.

keep up the good work..

EDIT:just seen that this is your first P/S work very nice job if so :D

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 06:33 AM

the BG is way to dark. it also needs a border, and you can barely read the text.

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 08:00 AM

Alot better than my first...

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 11:23 AM

2 dark :)

#6 Pogglemort

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 12:47 PM

It wasn't that dark when I made it.
after I saved it, I opened it and it was all black. so I just used it, I didn't want to make another one.

#7 Pogglemort

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 01:48 PM

BTW
check out this on I made for someone at a different site
http://img74.exs.cx/.../demoqoq7vy.jpg

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 01:52 PM

good job m8, just lighten that up a bit and WHAMMY!!!

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 04:25 PM

for a first photoshop thats a dam good design

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 04:51 PM

text needs smaller on da 1 u made 4 da other person

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Posted 16 March 2005 - 12:12 AM

Just keep the one you have. I dont like it personaly.. too dark, text sucks... but just keep trying and play around.

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Posted 16 March 2005 - 01:40 AM

Its good for ur first dude so dont mock him yae but the darkness thing is a prob. other den dat its sweet! :D





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