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#1 miraga715

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Posted 05 October 2007 - 07:44 PM

Hey guys! I have this design that I put together and just want to know if it's client worthy. I'd like to hear some ways to improved it so I can learn to improve. Thanks in advance!

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#2 TutNation

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Posted 06 October 2007 - 02:31 AM

Personally I LOVE it, but, what content is this site going to have on it? It says medical, is it going to offer services or is it like a portfolio?

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Posted 06 October 2007 - 06:08 AM

It looks very good very clean very sleek nice for the eyes, can't think of anything to better :-)

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Posted 06 October 2007 - 08:58 AM

yah that looks great i think it would really please the customer, the colours are perfect as well there bright so they attract you to the page but at the same time theres not an overload and it doesn't hurt the eyes.

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Posted 06 October 2007 - 06:51 PM

On the left hand side with the grey, line that up with the image above, will look spot on then.

#6 miraga715

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Posted 07 October 2007 - 01:16 PM

@Tutnation: Well, it's suppose to be an info site for a medical, PT and / or OT site.

@JohnC: At the left-hand site the dark grey is aligned to the left side of the image and the lighter-grey is aligned to the right of the image. Is that what you meant?

@Everyone: Thanks for the feedback! They didn't pick this one but I did this one based on what they described what they wanted me to do.

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The navbar is based on a tut here but I plan to redo it once they decide on a design. So, what'd you guys think?

Edited by miraga715, 07 October 2007 - 01:17 PM.


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Posted 07 October 2007 - 01:39 PM

Everything looks pretty great, except for the font. Maybe it's just me, but I don't really think it fits.

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Posted 07 October 2007 - 02:13 PM

View Postmiraga715, on Oct 7 2007, 01:16 PM, said:

The navbar is based on a tut here but I plan to redo it once they decide on a design. So, what'd you guys think?

I personally like the first one better, but still, both are really good. I'd say keep the first one, code it, then sell it. It's very professional.

Also, if you want a tip, for fonts 14 pt or under, turn off the anti-aliasing. It looks a lot more professional and clean. To do so, take the "Type Tool". Highlight the text you want to change then find the icon with two a's (anti-aliasing). There should be a few options, turn it to "none".

Edited by That's no fun, 07 October 2007 - 02:15 PM.


#9 miraga715

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Posted 07 October 2007 - 11:55 PM

@That's No Fun: Thanks for the info. Really intriguing it didn't come to mind to sell it as a template. Plus, thanks for the tip really appreciate it.

@madMUHHHH: Thanks for the feedback.

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Posted 08 October 2007 - 12:56 AM

I think the colours need a bit more organising, the blue doesnt really match with the green. but its up to you and the client

#11 miraga715

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Posted 08 October 2007 - 05:08 PM

Thanks guys your feedback help alot! I'll take into account everything you guys said.

#12 miraga715

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 03:13 PM

Hey guys. I have a question. That's no fun mentioned that I should code this and sell it but I just want to know how to go about doing that. Thanks.





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