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[Dezept1p]

Hello all!!
my new work www.prohoney.com/lilija or Visit My Website
I made this site for my girldfriend!...
Technology uses :
Adobe Flash CS3 Professional
Adobe Photoshop CS3
and my fantasy)))

.... it`s ~ about 1mb loading..-...don`t worry it has a loading...)))
....don`t forget to turn on sound...)) -
Please comments...!!!

[Jonhc]

Graphics look great!

Somethings that I'd change.

Remove the reflection from 'Welcome to Heaven'
Center the 'Sound off/on' Also with this when sound is off, it seems to cut some of the d of it ??
Maybe change picture 7/7 as it's the same as picture 1/7
I also think to remove the 'From Prohoney.com' from beneath the navigation as it's already in the bottom right

Good work

[Dezept1p]

yea i know it...
i was in a hurry....

[PaintingBlack]

Very clean and simple, but a flash website should take up the entire page. That much whitespace isn't necessarily good. Sound should be off by default, always. It should be up to the user whether to listen or not. The rollovers on the buttons aren't that great, the background should just change to a lighter shade of red. "From Prohoney.com", should have a rollover effect. Turn the opacity on the reflection of "Welcome to my heaven" down lower. Gallery should have a next/previous button. Contacts page doesn't work.

Now for the good. Everything else, your website looks great, the graphics are truly beautiful, and the music suits it very well. I criticize a lot, so don't think I don't like it. The good weighs out the bad by far, and you're very talented.

[Dezept1p]

yea....thanks for the comment...

... ....I did a flash gallery.... it`s loading with XMl..... i thinking about "next" and button and "back" - i can did it... ) - only u need...it`s just wath......ok....thank for this!

i have a webpages....which has "entry button" )))...it`s like another way..)))also i`ll thinking about it!!!

Contacts page doesn't work. .... - gr...really?...

.....yea...thanks...for comment... -

critics - help me... -to do it better....!!!