A little random for me, try going more with the flow of the render, kinda looks like that's what you were trying to do, I just thought I'd through that out there in case. I would at least give it an 8/10 if I was rating it.. I like your ideas and your work from what I've seen so far , keep it up...!!
its okay, the depth isn't bad, definately doesn't flow well, and the colours to me seem really off, first of all you think of murder which u named it and im like ok so blood red and crap, but its green? wered u get those colours from? if not red or something try to match the colours of the render to give it a better flow. Just some thoughts...