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#1 Realistic

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 10:08 AM

i just got a new work done:

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what do you think?

#2 Spooky

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 11:12 AM

It is ok, the text kinda throws it off. Also some of the crystals or flames or whatever those teal things are look computered and tooled, you want your image to be blended to where it becomes to a realistic sense to the viewer. When you have something where the shape is there, it makes them pay more attention. If the edges of the things on the bottom were more blending it would really blow this huge WOW out of it, like, maaan. Tons of things that are awesome usually dont have a focus point, it makes your mind wander.

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 11:15 AM

The text that really throws it off is the REALISTIC in the top left corner, the other is not that bad. Also try using some gradients, because atm its all one color

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 11:17 AM

Apache, on Mar 27 2005, 04:15 PM, said:

Also try using some gradients
That is what the effect of the blend I am saying does, it will have color on the bottom and darker theme at the top allowing a gradient effect to be shown but without using the actualy gradient tool.

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 12:17 PM

Lol k fine ill call it blending then :P didnt c u posted that sorry m8

#6 Realistic

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:24 PM

k i will fix that

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:35 PM

I like it, nice color ;) but u dont really need the realistic text in the corner i think. and the stars should be a little darker someplaces... in my op.

nice work :)

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:47 PM

ah, the first1 was better... :)

#9 Realistic

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 02:02 PM

Big change:

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#10 neoGFX

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 02:09 PM

YEAHHH.... thats the stuff!!!!! :) ;)

#11 Realistic

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 02:33 PM

Ty :)

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 04:35 PM

Looking good, try puttng the realistic text at like 20% opac if you really want it there.

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 06:26 PM

Yep i agree with Spooks over here, it still pulls the attention from the image

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 09:19 PM

yea, the text might look good really almost see thru (like 20%) but that secon version is much better...very cool man!





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