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#1 Shrimp

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 03:40 PM

Hey guys, :)

Check it out, Vector drawing with a trail effect behind a man. The figure was actually in another picture, as a vector. As I did not have the source file I had to re-vectorize it, if that is even a word. Hope you like it.

Enjoy... ;)

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#2 Jag

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 07:01 AM

I like the guy, but the gun is lacking detail. I dunno it just doesn't do it for me. Other than that, nice work...

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 08:02 AM

I agree with Jag. Not my type of graphic, but all in all it looks alright.

#4 Spooky

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 10:49 AM

I also agree with Jag, and I personally think the smoke is really bad, specially in the trail effect.... 7/10

#5 Jamie Huskisson

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 10:56 AM

i really like this pic, as its a vector its supposed to be simple and it looks like u've pulled that off well :P

but i'd advise a different font for the buttom, as D and O look about the same :)

#6 Shrimp

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 01:48 PM

Yeah, as that was the first draft of the picture I didn't expect a great response. As for the smoke, it was done very quickly at the end, I need to give it body and substance. The font wasn't great either, I am thinking of removing it completly and taking away the trail shadow. In fact all I am going to keep is the guy, and make it completly different other than the man.

I'll give it another shot, keep an eye out for a new post.

Thanks guys..

#7 Atomica

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 01:50 PM

Cool picture, nice and clean.
Suggestion: if you know how to, some facial would look good on the guy( eyes, mouth...)

#8 Shrimp

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 07:14 PM

I was just thinking of leaving him annon.. might give him a goatee or something.. :yoda:

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 09:36 PM

hey shrimp long time no speak! looks really good! good job, but u gotta add some more stuff to the bg to make it a bit more finished looking

#10 Shrimp

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Posted 29 March 2005 - 09:16 AM

Thanks.. Yeah...this was just a first draft. I'm going to take the guy out, and put it on a background witha texture.. u know./. maybe a splat.. :D thanks jat





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