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[syntex]

Hey guys,
me again with a new track me and my band wrote, this is 100% composed by us. its sort of a mellowy acoustic song that breaks into a heavy ending. any comments on the vid (the youtube page also if possible) would be much appreciated, on how we can improve, any parts you would change, etc.

"All That's Mine" by Arsenic;



Also, I am looking for a metal, hardcore etc song writer, preferiably has written lyrics before, PM me if you have any experience so we can talk.


Thanks guys

[vvtopkar]

Dude that was pretty good, I actually enjoyed that. Just some balance things here and there, but overall, that was a pretty sweet rip

[Ben]

That was really good But being a musician I couldn't help to notice that you're guitars were a LITTLE outta tune

I'm a prog/metal/rock guitarist been playing for just about all my life (12 years). I write my own solo's and would love to collaborate with you but I live in Australia

[syntex]

Ben, on Feb 7 2008, 06:19 AM, said:

But being a musician I couldn't help to notice that you're guitars were a LITTLE outta tune

Yeah I realised after I exported it off the camera, it was cos we just grabbed the camera half way through practice and recorded, nobody botherd to prep or anything, but thanks dude, maybe someday in the future we will be coming to aussie ;D

[Ben]

Haha no probs You have any other songs? Would like to hear them

[syntex]

Ben, on Feb 7 2008, 08:05 AM, said:

Haha no probs You have any other songs? Would like to hear them

No vids currently for newer tracks, we are almost done with a really heavy song, should have it in about 2 weeks!!
But we have a cover of a Trivium song here;

[N4Z.]

Pretty good. I enjoyed it, it had a sort of harmonic feel about it. Kinda like Atreyu songs, they start really metal, but have a good share of harmonic singing in there too....

Guy in the Red sucked tbh.

Joke

I enjoyed it very much

[syntex]

damn you soldier you still need to write lyrics for that song!!

thanks though!

[N4Z.]

syntex, on Feb 7 2008, 11:00 AM, said:

damn you soldier you still need to write lyrics for that song!!

thanks though!

(:

Yeah i know bitch. MSN Me.

[Ben]

language removed

Anyway nice cover