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#1 floque

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 02:10 PM

Hi,
Recently I was joking a little with friends about making my own brand. Well that joke run a little out of hand and now i am working on a website for my brand, where people can buy it. So i would like to have you opinion about the layout. The content is in Dutch so i am afraid most of you dont understand but that aint a problem, since it is just in progress.
If you can give me critique on the layout it would be cool:)

Floque.nl

Thnkaz!

#2 xXKZ2RageXx

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 02:19 PM

I think those colors hurt my retina O_o..
can't really say anything else, maybe it's just me

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 05:55 PM

That's really cool :D
I can't really say anything negative about it.

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 06:55 AM

not good for my resolution, also rough design, but its a good start

(try different font)

#5 floque

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Posted 16 April 2008 - 02:25 AM

View Postfudgy, on Apr 14 2008, 07:55 AM, said:

not good for my resolution, also rough design, but its a good start

(try different font)


Thanks!, Yes had some more complainments about the size. I am currently looking at it with 1920*1080. So for me looks good, but when i put like 1024*800 its shit.

What font do you recommenend?

And what exactly you mean bye rough design?

thans

#6 floque

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Posted 17 April 2008 - 02:11 PM

Size down,
now normal like 1000*800 or so:)
so also viewable for the less bigger screen-owners!

View Postfudgy, on Apr 14 2008, 07:55 AM, said:

not good for my resolution, also rough design, but its a good start

(try different font)


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Posted 21 April 2008 - 12:40 PM

The only problem is that there are people with even smaller resolutions than that, and also ones that use text browsers.
I think if you really wanted to do this, then have your images be large like before. Then have it check what resolution they're using and have it size things accordingly.
Also, to make things easier on people who aren't using a normal browser i'd get rid of the frames...i'd also say definitely get rid of the tables.

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Posted 21 April 2008 - 01:10 PM

All seems too boxy and bright to me. Cant read the text in the header (Dont know if its Dutch or just bad font).

You should try and calm the colours down a bit.

Ecko website is a great example of a brand website: http://www.shopecko.com/home/index.jsp

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Posted 17 June 2008 - 02:09 PM

I completly changed the design.
Still some illustrator but much more cms. The template coding is done by myself, and also they layout. If you have suggestions feel free to say.
Every improvement is good:D

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