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#1 n1n14

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Posted 27 April 2008 - 09:44 PM

Tell me what you think and what i can do to make it better! :rolleyes:

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#2 Scythar

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Posted 29 April 2008 - 03:50 PM

the way it is now, the shiny metal of the abstract should reflect the soldier.
And there is a white border around the helmet.
His gun is missing a part
Red light behind him (bottom left) doesnt make his back brighter
although everything is red, apparently looking at the soldier, i see a blueish light , so i am sure if you check your levels in the different channels, they wont match.
Due to all this, the soldier is not blended in.

Hope dont offend you by saying this though. Just my opinion thats all.

#3 Afro.

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Posted 30 April 2008 - 09:10 PM

u need to add way more effects, look on here for tuts or deviant art, hope that will help.





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