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[Skoven]

Hey

I'm new at this great looking forum.

I've made this website for my graphics.

What do you think of it? it's not the finished version. i will remove the counter.

http://homepage.mac....folie/home.html

Thanks

[Chaos King]

It's a good start. Gets the job done. Good job with using the flash gallery.

Would be nice if the images that have text were actually text.

[Skoven]

Thanks, actualy it's a JavaScript gallery

Sure i will make the text actual

[efd]

You may want to check your grammar and spelling here. It should read:

"On my site you will see a lot of my art no comma that i have made over the last years. So go check out the gallery.

I am open for job no hyphen offers."

I've found that people will take you more seriously if you have taken the time to check for such grammar mistakes and will most likely come back to your site because of it.

On another note, you may want to rename your gallery page. Right now, it's titled as "1".

[albinoAZN]

Don't forget to Capitalize I. Remember, you're important!

[pirateXcore]

Really, the text could be improved with some word changes. The way you have it written, even if you made the changes suggested, makes it sound like English is not your first language. Maybe it's not, this will hopefully improve it a little more.


On my site you will see a lot of the art that I have made over the last several (or maybe a number) years; so go check out the gallery.

I am open for job offers.


Anyway, onto the site itself...I think it's really good. No real suggestions.

[Dilfill]

First of all the adders...uhh yeah you need to get a new one and move it there or get a new one that is just a redirect.

Its good one thing I would add is some kind of bg image like a C4D or something not to much but just kinda back there coming off the sides. Also this is a must I think. You need a like to the home page link on every page even your gallery. I know all you gota do is hit back twice but still. Your dummies who see you site need to get back home right? Make the feel "safe". Home link on every page is needed I think.

Edited by Dilfill, 23 June 2008 - 05:38 AM.