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[remmydox]

Hey everyone. I'm back with three new designs from my previous three. I'm still learning so criticism is much appretiated.

First Signature was me just playing around with the clouds and blending the render into it.
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The second signature came from the robot render over at planetrenders. No C4D in this one, or brushes. A lot of layers, blending and fillers.
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My third signature was coming along greatly until I ran out of ideas. Hence why it's very bland and made a 2nd version.
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#3 Version 2:


C&C please.

[slappyking]

No.1 isnt working for me, i cant see it, lol.

No.3 isnt great, I dont think you should do any effects on the actual render until your a bit more advanced, sorry, and the bg isnt too good.

No.2 is brilliant! Very abstract, great smudging, Depth is great and the colours go very nicely, all it needs is a nice border, maybe a 2px white border (stroke / inside / white) and lower the opacity of your text and it would get an 8.5/10 from me mate, i love it.

Overall you are progressing really well, keep up the good work mate and i cant wait to see what else you produce!

Edited by slappyking, 09 July 2008 - 08:26 PM.

[remmydox]

Yeah, I'm still a newbie. Just experimenting with a few different things so I can learn a bit more.

Thanks for the good review on #2. I'll change it later on and re-upload.

[Cheez]

In sig 1 I liked how you blended it but I didnt.. for all sigs 8/10