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#1 bfva

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Posted 03 March 2009 - 12:16 PM

Hi everyone,

i have created my first ever website. It is just a simple wallpapers website, and you can download the wallpapers for your pc or mobile phone. I also have some HD wallpapers aswell.

I would like to know what you guys think of the site, and what improvements i could make, to make the site even better.

http://www.typinwallpapers.com

Thanks

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Posted 04 March 2009 - 06:45 PM

what part of the website did you do? design/coding?

looks neat though, especially for a first one

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Posted 05 March 2009 - 03:18 AM

Not bad but the ads in the space of where a header would normally go really dirties the design, try putting in a header and moving that ad somewhere else.

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Posted 14 March 2009 - 09:43 AM

View PostOpaque, on Mar 5 2009, 03:18 AM, said:

Not bad but the ads in the space of where a header would normally go really dirties the design, try putting in a header and moving that ad somewhere else.

I agree, put your website logo/title at the middle so that it would good, and move the ads to the sides. :)

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Posted 18 March 2009 - 07:18 AM

I like everything overall you did a great job. I just do not like that advertisement you have on the header. I feel as tho that really takes away from your website. Keep up the great work!

#6 bfva

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Posted 18 March 2009 - 12:50 PM

I have made the improvements, you suggested. I would like to know if there are any more improvements i need to make. Thanks for your feedback.

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Posted 18 March 2009 - 08:13 PM

The same page opens for each link, i.e. Wallpapers Page 1, which does not show the wallpaper for the celeb just chosen.

Also, you need to sort out the page names - if you are just doing design, then don't worry.





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