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[Bravi]

Hi everyone. I would like to hear some feedback about the banner that I'm creating for an upcoming Talent Showcase by TalentEXPO...

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[SebLev]

It's an interesting concept but I think you should get more pictures in there instead of just words... So that people will see the pictures first and it will attract their eyes more to the banner then they will start reading the information on it... Compared to a banner with just words I tend to just not bother reading it because I don't know what it's about from the first look I get at it.

Might just be me though. Also what's with the key? it seems out of place haha

I like what you did with the Lettering of Talent expo though... nice touch

[info072]

I agree with seblev, it needs some pictures or something to draw your eyes to it. I also think that it could use more color, the black and white dominates it too much and makes it look a bit dull. I do like how you have the words set up and the arrowish design at the top right, but i think the key should be replace with something more attractive.

Good job though, i like the overall concept. I wish you the best of luck in the contest