Hey, I recently took a second look at some photographs I shot at my summer job. I had a summer job at the island of Texel (The Dutch people here know it)
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Hope you like it
Robbert
Into the sea
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Xfader
, Aug 19 2009 01:51 PM
4 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 19 August 2009 - 01:51 PM
#2
Posted 20 August 2009 - 08:46 AM
wow, i want to go there
#3
Posted 21 August 2009 - 03:30 PM
Well I'd like to be there too and I see a potential in this idea. You could still fix some things:
1) Keep horizon stright - ther is nothing worse than tilted horizon
2) study the light - you have very hrash light there, it causes overexposure (white area in sea) - try to find a time where you can minimize it or another angle when light helps you out
3) Study the rule of thirds - the position of the person is little uncomfortable for eye, move him little more to right
Good job anyway!
1) Keep horizon stright - ther is nothing worse than tilted horizon
2) study the light - you have very hrash light there, it causes overexposure (white area in sea) - try to find a time where you can minimize it or another angle when light helps you out
3) Study the rule of thirds - the position of the person is little uncomfortable for eye, move him little more to right
Good job anyway!
#4
Posted 21 August 2009 - 09:41 PM
It's a beauty. The sea looks warm, and calm.
#5
Posted 24 April 2010 - 08:22 AM
Yes really good,
Hey, I think you did an awesome job posting this photo.
Hey, I think you did an awesome job posting this photo.
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