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#1 Phuzion Studio

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Posted 11 April 2010 - 04:39 PM

I know this is for websites, but I couldn't find a place for logos and since this logo will eventually be used on and for my website figured I would post here. Please critique

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#2 Jacorre

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Posted 13 April 2010 - 04:21 PM

Careful with transparencies especially if you're planning on printing the logo.

#3 PhilDesigns

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Posted 11 May 2010 - 10:47 PM

that font just doesnt seem to do it for me

#4 AndrewNL

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Posted 06 June 2010 - 01:47 AM

Yeah the font bothers me to. And i dont understand the concept of the squares. Maybe make some kind of reactor logo or something that indicates power. I usually make my logos based of the description of the business im doing it for. look for keywords that describe your business and put them together. Hopefully this helps. Make more concepts :D

#5 iDadGraphics

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Posted 09 June 2010 - 01:49 PM

Must be the season the logo looks like a collapsible graduation cap to me lol font doesnt work for me either

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Posted 29 June 2010 - 07:32 PM

The font will look much nicer if you have half of it normal and half of it bold maybe, give that a try.

#7 Jurnky

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Posted 21 July 2010 - 12:25 AM

Remember, Im criticizing your work, not you :)

The logo is boring.

Why? Because, firstly, your text says two words but only show one color. It looks flat. You want it to stand out. So, I would suggest maybe make 'phuzion' bold and keep 'studio' plain. Like this: phuzionstudio

Looks better, right?

Secondly, the image doesn't represent anything. To me it looks like a title floating between each other. Try emphasizing the logo maybe by adding another color. Use your imagination, and make it unique.

Good luck :)

Edited by Jurnky, 21 July 2010 - 12:25 AM.





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