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Posted 09 November 2010 - 03:46 PM

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 08:36 PM

Personally I find it way too busy. I like the idea you were going for but I would probably cut out the extra pictures on the sides. Also, I'm not really fond of the stroke you have on the black city shape. Other then that it does have potential. I just find it too busy. Great work though.

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Posted 10 November 2010 - 04:24 AM

Way too busy, I don't know what to look at first. Remove the thumbnails on the edges, make the city scape smaller, move down the film title and make it bigger maybe? Remove the heart in my opinion.

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Posted 10 November 2010 - 09:35 AM

Personally I find it way too busy. I like the idea you were going for but I would probably cut out the extra pictures on the sides. Also, I'm not really fond of the stroke you have on the black city shape. Other then that it does have potential. I just find it too busy. Great work though.

THANKS A LOT! Appreciated :)

Way too busy, I don't know what to look at first. Remove the thumbnails on the edges, make the city scape smaller, move down the film title and make it bigger maybe? Remove the heart in my opinion.

THANKS a lot mate! :)

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 11:03 AM

As others have pointed out, it's way too busy with all of those photograps on the side. I do like the silhoutte cityscape though.




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