Any improvements that I can make? It's meant to be used with a typewriter font.
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Started by WarGoddess, May 31 2005 02:38 AM
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 02:38 AM
I made this earlier, trying to do more work with random brushes, and I thought that something with closed eyes and the mouth would be sort of a good thing.
Any improvements that I can make? It's meant to be used with a typewriter font.
Any improvements that I can make? It's meant to be used with a typewriter font.
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 05:54 AM
Looks really good, but to use that kind of bg ur text placement has to be close to perfect, so really work on that. Definatly make it a CSS Page
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 11:56 AM
Argh those lips are annoying 
. I don't rly like it. sorry
But i think there is still some good things too
. I don't rly like it. sorryBut i think there is still some good things too
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 01:05 PM
I think its really nice, except i agree with Samiwerty about the lips, they just dont look right.
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 01:11 PM
Samiwerty, on May 31 2005, 05:56 PM, said:
Argh those lips are annoying . I don't rly like it. sorry
. I don't rly like it. sorry#6
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 04:21 PM
Samiwerty, on May 31 2005, 11:56 AM, said:
But i think there is still some good things too
lol Adam, you mean this doesnt count? 
i like this, the face is a bit prominent but its a good overall effect
the text lines look a bit out of place though, they're too...perfect, straight, y'know?
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Posted 31 May 2005 - 05:00 PM
ThaBirdman, on May 31 2005, 09:21 PM, said:
Samiwerty, on May 31 2005, 11:56 AM, said:
But i think there is still some good things too
lol Adam, you mean this doesnt count? i like this, the face is a bit prominent but its a good overall effect
the text lines look a bit out of place though, they're too...perfect, straight, y'know?
And as for the spacing being perfect, I've embedded a font into the page that works flawlessly for the page (not sure about some browsers, but works in FF and IE) so it's not so bothersome as to find a font that works.
I just had my husband test on FF in PPC Linux and the text doesn't render, so I suppose I will just take out the lines, so that the text will not be forced off the page because of different browsers.
Thanks again for the recommendations, and I will do something about the lips.
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