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#1 _*streetracer_*

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Posted 29 June 2005 - 08:47 AM

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i want to get better leave all feedback good bad n ugly tell wat 2 improve on
also i cant find a tut im looking for

#2 Proz0r

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Posted 29 June 2005 - 09:15 AM

Phu... What can I say?
First of all...I think the sigs with cars in it are the hardest to give a good overall feeling.
The cars don't pop out.
The text...ohh dear, the text :D
Everything you've written on your sigs is hard to read or choppy... We don't want that now do we?

ok, the first sig:
+ Background seems ok
- Font is choppy
- Stroke around the car? :(
- Car layer seems to be on difference or overlay, when you want it to jump out, never use overlay or difference!
- You tried to make the car softer by adding blur? (It shows at the stroking around it)
score: 4/10
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second sig:
=> same comment as 1st sig
score: 4.5/10
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third sig:
+ Background seems nice
+ Good border (without the stroke)
- No overlay or difference
- Don't stroke the softened border
score: 5.5/10
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fourth sig:
+ Border
- Car painted in photoshop?
- What does it say on the top?
score: 5/10
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Fifth sig:
+ Background
+ Render color
+ Stroke around render
- The text Jay-Z (Stroke it with another color. Black for example)
score: 6.5/10

The reason why you can't find a tut about it is because it's so hard to create a good signature with a car in it. I've only seen 2 guys who performed a good job at it.

One last hint: Work on your text & EXPERIMENT!
Do different things, try something else. Your car sigs are all pretty much look-a-likes. You've done the same things to them. I'm not saying that the 'same' is bad, but you've got to have something good to do the same. :(

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PS: This is my opinion and I hope you will respect them as much as I respect your opinion.

#3 _*streetracer_*

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Posted 29 June 2005 - 09:54 AM

ty bro





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