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#1 affenmunkEY

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Posted 12 October 2010 - 05:33 AM

Hi, I wanted to get some feedback on this piece - it's meant to be a Loyalty card for a cosmetic salon, there are a couple of variations, I'm open for anything and hope to get some constructive critique! And yes, the Logo is relevant, I'm not sure about the dots on the S, whether to have them or not... The last two attachments are meant to be the back of the card.

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Attached File  Treue_Karte1.jpg   175.45KB   8 downloads


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Attached File  Treue_Karte2.jpg   221.5KB   5 downloads

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Attached File  Treue_Karte3.jpg   161.94KB   3 downloads

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Attached File  Treue_Karte4.jpg   237.67KB   4 downloads

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Attached File  Treue_Karte5.jpg   214.57KB   6 downloads

Back#1

Attached File  Rueckseite1.jpg   141.97KB   5 downloads

Back#2

Attached File  Rueckseite3.jpg   184.89KB   7 downloads

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Edited by affenmunkEY, 12 October 2010 - 05:40 AM.


#2 Bravi

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Posted 14 October 2010 - 09:14 AM

I, personally would change the font. Set it to something simple like Arial. and I would get rid of drop shadow on the text. if you need to make the text stand out more, use a different color of the background. or different color of the font.

I don't understand what are those '6 finger images' about? #1 - #6. Whatever it is, it ruins the design I think.. I would also add a texture to the background to give it more details. Something like 'Filter -> add noise' type texture maybe?

and on the backside, I think the 1st version is good, just don't like the '10% ...' thing : )

#3 Bravi

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Posted 14 October 2010 - 09:16 AM

Add some more colors to the bg actually. maybe splatter / watercolor brushes as well, as it is a beauty salon, more color would be appropriate.

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Posted 02 December 2010 - 10:50 AM

These are awesome and I like the Back#2. Just add a texture to the background to give it more details.




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