feedback welcomed

well the technical parts are all ok... except the name... kinda hard to locate and read.

that said... sorry but its kinda boring. kinda says, "this is my signature, now where do i wait in line?"

great background and render blending looks ok, but what exactly is supposed to catch the eye? cuz homeboy just looks like he's at the dmv.

spice it up, put yoda doing a backflip sequence in there or something... well if you won't do it, then maybe i will.

j/k your project not mine.