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Started by Feren6 , Aug 28 2006 11:02 PM

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#1 Feren6

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Posted 28 August 2006 - 11:02 PM

I'm kinda new to the whole developing scene..i do small stuff here and there but never actually pulled something together completely.

Here;s my site

http://www.x10studios.com

I need to figure out how i want to do it so when they click on the link it'll show a proper format..maybe just have it go onto the left side in place of the 'Home Content' or whatever..PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE POST YOUR CRITIQUE AND GIVE ME IDEAS ON HOW TO CHANGE AND MAKE BETTER!
Edit: Maybe put lightbox on it?

Edited by Feren6, 28 August 2006 - 11:08 PM.

#2 Gibbons

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Posted 28 August 2006 - 11:09 PM

wow ----- looks really good for you first. use lightbox, im addicted. lol.

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 12:20 AM

I love how original it is, awesome job!

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 12:49 AM

Great for you first site, might be just my screen I'm on atm but make your watermelon stand out a little more as it's too close to your bg colors.

Good luck with your site.

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 06:48 AM

Looks good, i would advise chaning the font as it doesn't really look nice. 9.5/10! :)

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 09:11 AM

Are you sure its your first, because it is VERY good, keep it up! :)

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 02:17 PM

woah, it's awsome man, the concept is very good
you could add some rollovers to it and then put the text and content a bit to the right, becouse it's too close to the end of screen

#8 Feren6

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 02:56 PM

Thanks for the input guys, i'll get on it right away!

As for the content to the right..I wanted to make it so it'd be focused on the left..so i'm not sure im going to change that. I'm also going to be making that a flash banner :-D

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 03:21 PM

to good i dont beleive its your first but nice work anyways:)

#10 Feren6

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 03:33 PM

It's my first release...not really first site but first official release

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 05:45 PM

GJ.!

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Posted 29 August 2006 - 05:50 PM

looks cool good job for your first time.

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Posted 02 September 2006 - 02:26 PM

Wow, it very good. =]
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