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#1 Rory

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 12:41 AM

Not anything flash just a tutorial indexing website layout. Tell me what ya think! :P

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Edited by sik of it, 17 September 2006 - 04:20 AM.


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Posted 16 September 2006 - 02:35 AM

Looks fantastic, but would like to see it live??

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 02:44 AM

Thanks. I will start coding soon.

I bet glen will have some points on imprvements though. He he always seems to be able to pick out the smallest mistakes. :D

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 04:42 AM

looks good tho i'm not a fan of things being centrered unless necessary (ie, the block headers, etc) plus i wouldnt have them that big either (height.... tho both comments are just my personal preferences really lol)

could maybe do with a little more detail added.... and where's the search? :D

imo a search engine is a must for this kind of site...

let us know how it comes along :D i'd b curious to see

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 05:48 AM

It looks very nice, the colors are great (maybe to dark but in the end it's nice)

you could try to change just one small thing and see if it looks good

make this main buttons smaller (not the font)


(this english is killing me) :D

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 12:21 PM

nice job on that layout
the navigation should be thiner, i think, it takes much space, but not very thin.
Also I am not really a fan of the banner. sorry.
but i like the design

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 02:19 PM

could maybe do with a little more detail added.... and where's the search? :google:
imo a search engine is a must for this kind of site...
let us know how it comes along :D i'd b curious to see


Where do you think the detail is required. I will add a search soon, I can't beleive I forgot it lol! :love: Once I finish the layout I will repost it. Thanks alot for the comments davey. :D

Also I am not really a fan of the banner. sorry.


I don't mind. I only did a quick job so I could see what you guys thought of the website as a whole. Besides I just finished making some fractal brushes and I can't wait to try them out on the header. Thanks alot for the comments d2squared. :D

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 07:36 PM

Ok now I have done a quick update based on your comments. Tell me if you think it is an improvement and what you think can be done to further improve the design:

Lol this image was removed too. Keep scrolling for the latest one!

Edit: The reason that the background pattern seems a bit edgy up against some of the tables is I took down the file quality to save download time. :D

Edited by sik of it, 17 September 2006 - 04:24 AM.


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Posted 16 September 2006 - 09:28 PM

looks good but the navigation buttons shouldnt be so tall.

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Posted 16 September 2006 - 11:16 PM

looks good but the navigation buttons shouldnt be so tall.


U looked at my most recent one right? If so do other people think they need to be even smaller as well?

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 01:49 AM

the nav is fine as it is, I think that makes it unique. Good job on the improvment. Banner still needs work although its better than the previous one. maybe lower the opacity of those yellow stings
Good job

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Posted 17 September 2006 - 01:55 AM

Thanks d2. I am going to do some hard work on the banner as I know it still isn't good enough. Once I like it i'll repost the finished product.

p.s
Davey I have added in a search now but I forgot it in the last redesign. It will be on my next update! :D

EDIT: Ok here is my next version:
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Tell me what ya think. :D

Edited by sik of it, 17 September 2006 - 04:22 AM.





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