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[esperant]

Hey. i made this using c4d.

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[rc69]

Well, i'm not sure about the whole "realistic" thing. The overal look looks like it was rendered on a computer, and the car seems to be a little dispraportionate to the house (i.e. 5 people can easily fit in the car, where maybe 2 can fit in the house...).
But other then the proportions thing, it's not that bad. Did you download or model the car yourself?

p.s. you need a garage door

[-Michael-]

It's good and all, but you really need to do an HDRI of it, that's how they make it look real in the movies!

[Rubber Duckie]

I do not know much about C4d. But I looks good.. The car needs some work though.. And It is nice to see people do something different than renders in c4d! It also need a Garage Unless that is the back of the house

[esperant]

Hey. thanks for your coments and i wantedt to ask: fcuk? how do i do the HDRI cud u explain more?

ps. thanks for the garage reminder. iam curently making it now.

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ohh PS i modeled the car aswell. i will deisply it individualy leter

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[adam123]

fcuk? how do i do the HDRI cud u explain more?

I think there's a tutorial on the forums somewhere. I'll go look

Edit: http://www.pixel2lif...?showtopic=1020

[SHIVMOO]

It's good and all, but you really need to do an HDRI of it, that's how they make it look real in the movies!

if its a fully 3d movie hrdi's arent needed and they make the movie look stupid
and it needs a brick wall or something.. the current grey looks like the default texture each object gets

[Sesh]

Im currently designing a home in Autocad. C4D! Wow, that good c4d work. GJ. I think im going to take my future into architecture. Thats a good career.

[esperant]

hey i have tried fixing the image. thanks for all your advice. sorry about the lighting.

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[Jaymz]

Ohh wow very nice with the textures

[Jamie Huskisson]

that looks AWESOME

massive improvement!

[Rubber Duckie]

A big improvement!! Looks a lot better!! Great Job!!

[rc69]

lol, now it reminds me of claymation
But that's still one heck of an improvement from the previous render. The cement in front of the car seems a little shiny though. It's textured, so i know its not buffed cement (you might want to work on that). And the top of the garage door seems like it needs to be moved down about half an inch (or 4 pixels, depends on how you want to look at it).

Just some suggestions, but still a great job as-is.

[ThaBirdman]

Very good looking w/the textures! a great improvement, though it does look a little like the SIMS, nice work though!

[Matheus]

total A-W-S-O-M-E

man, thats amazing
O.O

11/10

[esperant]

Hey thanks. to all of yous. the improvement is all your help and coments. i was told that the floor was a bit wierd. so i have once again fixed the garage door and the floor.

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[Ckristian]

Just a couple of things I noticed...The trees (one on the bottom left and near the steps) look a lil short, maybe make them bigger

Also the positioning of the tree near the steps look a lil awkward...like you park the car and then walk around the tree to get inside. So maybe, move that tree to some other place.

Car looks nice from what I can see

Good job overall

[esperant]

Ohh. i have removed the tree. any better?

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[esperant]

in the evening a bit.

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[gty]

i love all the new ones they look so cool..nice work esperant