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#1 loganx0

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 03:56 PM

I had to create a superhero montage for siemens and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it, the video is in quicktime 7 format check it out here

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 07:52 PM

You missed the last 'e' in 'superheroes'.

Also if you switched Superman and Captain America around, that would make it a bit better, in my opinion. Seeing that the first superhero anyone thinks of is usually superman. And because his clip is slightly longer, and you can fade out a bit slower.

Other than that, it looks very professional and well made. The music suits it pefectley

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Posted 09 January 2006 - 04:28 AM

You missed the last 'e' in 'superheroes'.

Also if you switched Superman and Captain America around, that would make it a bit better, in my opinion. Seeing that the first superhero anyone thinks of is usually superman. And because his clip is slightly longer, and you can fade out a bit slower.

Other than that, it looks very professional and well made. The music suits it pefectley


thanks for checking it out, I'll try it with the changes you suggested and see how it looks.

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Posted 09 January 2006 - 06:31 AM

looks cool mate..
only thing that disturbed was that the superman cape, was not moving fluently, I mean there's an edge of the cape that is just still. maybe animate that one also

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Posted 10 January 2006 - 04:31 AM

looks cool mate..
only thing that disturbed was that the superman cape, was not moving fluently, I mean there's an edge of the cape that is just still. maybe animate that one also


I see what you mean, i'd never noticed before




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