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#1 ascen9

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 07:50 AM

Hey Guys!

I've been working on my website on and off for some time. Finally I have got it to a stage where it is more or less structurally complete. I am more than happy to take C & C and any suggestions that you may have! This website validates both in XHTML and CSS - which was part of the problem with using a CMS. However, Joomla made the editing process quite easy and rather enjoyable!

Anyway, here is my website: Ascendancy 9 Media

#2 Indigo

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 11:06 AM

I really like it, it's simple and clean. The one thing I can say as critique or as an advice, is to place the text "Home" with the same padding as the rest of the text. Everything else - Great!

Just an error I get here (I'm on WinXP, using Opera, if you wondered):
When I drag my mouse above the links at the top, and then remove it again, there's left a white space on the right of the links. If you fix this, your site would be even greater.

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 12:58 PM

I really like the smoothness and flow , and the rollovers are beautiful. The colors are nice.


I just really like the whole site in all.

#4 ascen9

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Posted 16 March 2006 - 05:50 PM

Thanks for your comments thus far!

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Posted 17 March 2006 - 09:27 AM

Looks good, I think the grey on the side of the page should strech to the bottom but overall great look! :)

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#6 Mindgamez

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Posted 17 March 2006 - 09:59 AM

The "page" text should go under the title of the page so that it reads "Links page" instead of "Page links". Anti-aliased text for the buttons would be nicer as well. A partially opacitized abstract render or image as a background for the banner would make it look a bit less plain and more complicated. Maybe, just maybe.. a touch of hard gloss over the buttons and grey bar? Just a thought.

And just being a prick here, I don't understand your "the hub of web standards design". The hub of web standards compliant design? The hub of web design standards? Could you possibly explain what that means? Keep up the good work.

#7 ascen9

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Posted 20 March 2006 - 07:14 AM

Thanks for your suggestions. Much appreciated.

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Posted 24 March 2006 - 06:17 AM

Great design, i love the green and grey together. The whole layout is great well done

#9 Mickoe

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Posted 24 March 2006 - 09:59 PM

Actually nice, but your menu item could be improve. I don't like the hover background, however your web site is clean. Looks like dotclear a lil bit :P

#10 ascen9

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Posted 17 April 2006 - 02:33 AM

Thanks for your comments. I have implemented your suggested changes on the menu items - thanks Mickoe!

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 07:45 AM

quite like it, though it needs to flow greater, but i'm annoyed atm as i can't tink of how.

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 09:28 AM

very nice! the navigation has been really well designed.

good job!

#13 ascen9

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Posted 20 April 2006 - 07:17 AM

quite like it, though it needs to flow greater, but i'm annoyed atm as i can't tink of how.


Thanks. :tiphat:

I would be grad to hear any ideas you may have - should you think of them.




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