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#1 krstjern

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Posted 05 April 2006 - 04:49 AM

Hello there, this my fourth web design/layout I do in Photoshop, and I wanted to post it here so I can know what to do better and what is wrong.
Well, I'm not gonna make this long, so here it is:

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C&C Please :ph34r:

#2 greg

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Posted 05 April 2006 - 11:59 AM

I think there is too much of the same color, and the menu links really don't stand out at all; I barely noticed them.

Also, the choice of color is really irritating on the eyes.

Edited by greg, 05 April 2006 - 12:00 PM.


#3 DarkSuiyoken

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 10:04 AM

Yes, I agree, there are too many of the same colour.

I always have that problem too. Try adding some white or orange to this design, krstjern.

I'm not too sure why your navigation buttons at the top have to be seperated into 2 rows. You could probably put them into one row.

Nevertheless, this is pretty good for your 4th try at web design. Keep it up. :)

PS: Try doing a layer mask on your header where your 2 images blend together.

Edited by DarkSuiyoken, 06 April 2006 - 10:05 AM.


#4 Mercedez

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Posted 06 April 2006 - 11:45 AM

Well, I won't repeat the blue on blue issue but my main problem is with the navigation, the fact that it's in two places and some of the buttons (tutorials,fans,anime) appear twice is confusing. Moving on to the positive...I like your banner and the font you used to make it; it would be a lovely site if you could just throw in another color or two.

#5 Dtrigger

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Posted 17 April 2006 - 12:48 PM

cool one but yea a bit too bluish

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Posted 17 April 2006 - 12:53 PM

i would say u would need to work on your links, so that you want them in the same place and pick a better colour for the writing then your on your way.
I love the layout tho :D

#7 Bryn

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Posted 19 April 2006 - 07:44 AM

On header try and fade the blue into the red, and if you're going to keep the red then incorporate some red details and text in the layout or the red just doesn't suit and takes all of the attention out of the rest of the layout.

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Posted 22 April 2006 - 12:29 PM

the turquoise in the middle needs changed in my opinion... bit too harsh a contrast for the eyes... and yea, i'm not sure if i like how u did the links... but overall it is a good attempt...




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