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[BeaverElfeater]

Ok the client wanted a simple, clean, but attractive template.

Originally i was going to do it in flash but the flash part got canceled because the client didnt want it

but here was the start
http://axhibition.com/fwe.html

Here is the FINAL html version
http://deejayfred.com/

[Stephen]

First impressions: I do not like the 'DJ FRED' text, as I am not a great fan of the outer glow effect however that is just personal preference. The text content is a little to much in-your-face I think, the pure white contrasts to much with the layout design a lot as that is quite dark. Perhaps tone the white down a few levels, maybe a light grey?
Apart from those little pointers I think it looks great. Its fit for purpose, I like those little paint splat effects you have too.

Edited by Stephen, 12 April 2006 - 08:24 PM.

[makavelimx]

What stephen said about the title, on the bottom, the yellow is somewhat overpowering so you might want to bring the tone down a little bit

btw, there's an extra " © " so be sure to clean that up

Other than that, it's pretty good, your client should be happy

[BeaverElfeater]

First impressions: I do not like the 'DJ FRED' text, as I am not a great fan of the outer glow effect however that is just personal preference. The text content is a little to much in-your-face I think, the pure white contrasts to much with the layout design a lot as that is quite dark. Perhaps tone the white down a few levels, maybe a light grey?
Apart from those little pointers I think it looks great. Its fit for purpose, I like those little paint splat effects you have too.

actually that text is not mine he edited that himself, and i was quite suprised for seeing that too this was the orignal look to the site http://www.click2hos...4/21903temp.png

What stephen said about the title, on the bottom, the yellow is somewhat overpowering so you might want to bring the tone down a little bit

btw, there's an extra " © " so be sure to clean that up

Other than that, it's pretty good, your client should be happy

thank you i didnt put the content though thanks for both of your comments