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#1 Matheus

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 01:49 AM

Very simple and clean
I wanna know what you guys think of it
have a look: http://studiostortz.freespaces.com/

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#2 Wybe

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 05:58 AM

minimalism is a nice excuse, but this is too plain IMHO. Try some background colours here and there, and please, align the text to the left in one way or another :P

#3 SebLev

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 07:02 PM

not bad but yeah too simple i find....
its ok to have it simple but theirs a limite :P

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 09:44 PM

The content area doesn't blend in witth the rest of the site. I can tell you used a table there and tried to add a border. Just my 2 cents.

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 10:03 PM

While you have a good concept idea going, I will have to agree with everyone else. It is just too simple and it just doesn't have that professional vibe to it. The icons are very good, but they just don't do any justice with providing a tangible layout.

I would play around with the layout a bit more, try adding in some content with all that white-space floating around. :P

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 10:39 PM

not bad but yeah too simple i find....
its ok to have it simple but theirs a limite :P

I agree with lilman, it seems to be just a little to simple.

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Posted 23 April 2006 - 11:41 PM

for a few seconds i thought the splash image stopped loading halfway in a diagonal way?... hehe.. it took me a few seconds to realize what the image was...


well anyway, i think you should do without the splash screen cause it doesn't really surve a purpose and doesn't have much visuals. a splash screen should have one or the other, or both...

i also think your site would look perfectly fine in an 800x600 so that notice at the bottom is misleading :D

but i like the colors, the icon at top, and the feather at bottom :P

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Posted 24 April 2006 - 12:28 PM

I agree about the splash page. It's just one extra step to get to your site. I use a splash on my site but it's because I have the visitor decide which studio to enter.

Edited by Jacorre, 24 April 2006 - 12:29 PM.


#9 Matheus

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Posted 24 April 2006 - 02:01 PM

thanks guys
but the idea is that: make a webpage for any reslution (looks good on 800 x600 but at 1024 x 768 it lefts mnay space, isnt it?) and simple as google (you may have noticed that the idea came from google's layout.

anyway, I have a problem with iFrames, I'm trying to make something more like the traditional layout of menu/title/content without frames but is a little bit hard

EDIT: new URL without that ad from freespaces at the top corner
http://paginas.terra...s/studiostortz/

Edited by Myoto, 24 April 2006 - 02:05 PM.


#10 Ju5T

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Posted 30 April 2006 - 04:42 AM

Add some styles to website.




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