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#1 Matheus

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Posted 18 August 2006 - 08:13 PM

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#2 seraph!m

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Posted 18 August 2006 - 08:21 PM

It's so simple at first I was opposed but you really made it work!

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EDIT: Although I dont like to see all those TD and TR tags.. :mellow:

Edited by seraph!m, 18 August 2006 - 08:23 PM.


#3 Aussiestinger

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Posted 18 August 2006 - 10:00 PM

The content just seems abit messy, especially the main page, thought there was a couple of ads but they were links to other sections lol. I don't like it as much as your old ones sorry.

#4 Zippys

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 12:05 AM

Not much of a design at all.
Ya, it looks ok, but it also looks like you threw it together in about 5 minutes.
You could put more effort into a portfolio.

Good work though.

Edited by Zippys, 19 August 2006 - 12:14 AM.


#5 austen

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 12:31 AM

I love the simplicity of it, however it may be slight overkill... add a little more contrast, or some light shades of grey or a rounded off content area that matches the navigation... keep in mind that these are just suggestions, and either way it looks good.

#6 Matheus

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 09:41 AM

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#7 austen

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 10:53 AM

Let us all know what you come up with, it's a VERY good start and I'd love to see it completed!

-austen ;)

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 11:46 AM

i think for the content show it off more, your site is just to plain for simple thumbnails to work.

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 12:31 PM

You should have used iframes one every page :P lol j/k

I'd remove the banner like links to your "about" and "portfolio" page and have some sample work and some short text there instead. Thats just my opinion though.

Edited by xis, 19 August 2006 - 12:31 PM.


#10 Matheus

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 12:52 PM

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#11 seraph!m

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 01:37 PM

Upon looking deeper, I would urge you to consider optimizing your images, some of them are over 20K and could be brought way down in file size, saving you bandwidth and your viewers frustration.

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 03:27 PM

On your contact use a e-mail form instead of just putting your e-mail on your site. Unless you enjoy spam, that is. Besides that a nice form looks more pro.

#13 Matheus

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 03:47 PM

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#14 xis

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 04:03 PM

I already have tryed to use forms but it didn't worked


What do you mean it didn't work? Does it have something to do with you hosting provider?

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 04:21 PM

add a little more contrast, or some light shades of grey or a rounded off content area that matches the navigation...


thanks for the advice, I'll see if I put something to enchance the content area

but it also looks like you threw it together in about 5 minutes.


the whole concept thing took whole weeks. I wanted to have something diferent. There are some details to take consideration, for exemple: the rollovers arent a simply color change, the text changes size too... yea, that's like easy to do, but ask me how much websites does have it.


thanks all for comments
I would really apriciate ideas for the content

How much websites does have it?

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Posted 19 August 2006 - 04:41 PM

add a little more contrast, or some light shades of grey or a rounded off content area that matches the navigation...


thanks for the advice, I'll see if I put something to enchance the content area

but it also looks like you threw it together in about 5 minutes.


the whole concept thing took whole weeks. I wanted to have something diferent. There are some details to take consideration, for exemple: the rollovers arent a simply color change, the text changes size too... yea, that's like easy to do, but ask me how much websites does have it.


thanks all for comments
I would really apriciate ideas for the content

How much websites does have it?

I think he meant how many websites have it, meaning have text that gets bigger on the rollover.

Edited by Tirus, 19 August 2006 - 04:41 PM.


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Posted 19 August 2006 - 05:54 PM

its alright good graphics but i cant put my finger on what looks off.

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Posted 20 August 2006 - 04:27 PM

I think he meant how many websites have it, meaning have text that gets bigger on the rollover.



Loads, its a very common roll over, infact if you browse this forum topic your find a few of the review sites have them. Myabe not colour change and font increase, but at least two have font increase and font colour change. some have just a simple background colour change, or font decrease or alignment change.

Its not unique, but that doesnt mean its bad. :)

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Posted 20 August 2006 - 04:59 PM

Myoto I love it. Simplistic!!! well done.

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Posted 20 August 2006 - 05:18 PM

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