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[d2Squared]

Ok, so here is mini website, just to collect my work and put all my stuff there.
Some of the stuff are currently Under Construction, but I got the Photography Page open, so make sure yuo check it out.

http://www.http-down.net/Dor

Tell me what you think about the design.
The Coding isnt a big part of me, but i tried to. Please dont critiqe on the coding, because i know i suk at it.

well, Enjoy

[Illinifan91]

it wont show the page i get an error.

[Matheus]

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[mattyK]

I see it... not too shabby, probably be better with all of your content in there

[d2Squared]

it wont show the page i get an error.

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sorry guys, there were a problem in the host, it should be working now/...

Edited by d2Squared, 31 August 2006 - 05:11 PM.

[Dance]

The text in the navbox is somewhat blurry coz its gifed, the gallery is somewhat boring due to a lack of thumbnails and the site.. Well it doenst have anything that makes you want to stay there. There is no expolration or change that makes you want to explore it. That something is done fast isnt realy a excuse for it to look like something unplanned if you choose to publish it out. Show of more, we all like clean and simple designs but you need to show that you do have something that makes people want to view your stuff if its going to figure as a personal portfolio.

[d2Squared]

ok, I take your comment into a count.
True, ill see what i can do

Edited by d2Squared, 31 August 2006 - 06:34 PM.

[Tirus]

yeah, the top left navigation looks a little crammed in...try to let it breathe.

also, try and get some more of that blue into the layout...too much gray.

[d2Squared]

The text in the navbox is somewhat blurry coz its gifed, the gallery is somewhat boring due to a lack of thumbnails

Added Thambnails...

I was going for a small site and a small lookin one. I dont think that a Personal Site can be that interesting. It was just made so That i can keep all my stuff in there, and some of the "stuff" is Under Construction. Also its not really a personal site, as i said, its just to keep all my work there. Well, thats my point of view.

Thanks for the comments though, they will help

Edited by d2Squared, 01 September 2006 - 11:39 AM.

[Meitar]

Hi dor.
the mini website very Good.

[Rory]

Nice website visually but once you get it up and running you may think of making it a bit more dialup freindly. There are some parts when you could use a background colour and a broder instead of images which would save time for dialup users. Otherwise it is quite a nice design!

[d2Squared]

Thanks. Ye, I know what you guys mean. For now I'll leave it like that. Too lazy and busy to chage stuff there.
Thanks again

[Illinifan91]

its alright a little bit of a load time and there isnt much color its a little bland.

[greg]

The text (all throughout the site) is so tiny that I honestly didn't even want to read more than a few words.

If you want people to stay on your site, make it easier for them to actually obtain some information from you. You're not doing a good job by using 8px font, or whatever you have there.

[d2Squared]

i kinda meant to do it small, but i guess its too small, so I'll change it as soon as I'll be able to