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#1 Evolution68

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 10:34 AM

http://evotestserver.freehostia.com/

this is the template for my new website please tell me how to improve. its ment to be a simple design with easy navagation and easy to read. C&C PLZ

its getting .commed when my paypal can be arsed to go and pay the web host.

#2 Evolution68

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 03:50 PM

uber bump

#3 Matheus

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 05:43 PM

I don't know where to start
the design is not good in any point, I think istead of I start listing like a hundread of things to consider and fix, maybe you should get some inspiration at some showcase sites

http://www.webcreme.com/
http://bestwebgallery.com/
http://cssremix.com/
http://www.designsnack.com/

#4 Illinifan91

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Posted 09 October 2006 - 06:21 PM

um to tell you the truth, start over like myoto said.

#5 mr a-bomb

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Posted 10 October 2006 - 01:13 AM

Hmm, I dont really like the design, I think the text is too large and the images look kinda bland to me. As Myoto and fusionmanx said, I'd reccomend starting over

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Posted 10 October 2006 - 01:50 AM

also the colours chosen dont work together and make it look borin...

to me it just lacks creativity, sorry

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Posted 10 October 2006 - 06:59 AM

You really need more experience in webdesign bro.

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Posted 10 October 2006 - 10:17 AM

If your getting a .com for your site then I'd suggest this domain, 'this-is-a-joke.com' No, seriously if your thinking of going to put this on the web then I'd pay someone to make a template for you. If your no good at templates but you are at games then it is a very good idea.

Edited by Al3x, 10 October 2006 - 10:18 AM.


#9 cigraphics

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Posted 10 October 2006 - 01:18 PM

it's not a bad ideea but it's too noobish

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Posted 13 October 2006 - 11:39 AM

1. do not reply to your own post
2. the site is big and unfriendly, when i see it i don't want to look inside because i feel the content won't be good. The colours are horrible and it is not easy on the eyes.

#11 Evolution68

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Posted 13 October 2006 - 02:25 PM

Halijula ive redisned it compleatly
the background im working on o dont critisise it because it is not the one i will use

Edited by Evolution68, 13 October 2006 - 02:26 PM.


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Posted 13 October 2006 - 07:33 PM

the link seems to be broken.

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#13 Evolution68

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 07:41 AM

http://evotestserver.freehostia.com/
works for me

#14 Trix06

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 07:49 AM

Yuck! Sorry thats horrible. Thats no design, looks like windows when its rebooting after you haven't shut down your computer properly. :huh:

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 10:28 AM

WAY to blue. Trix06 try giving him some ideas on how to make it better instead of just saying it sucks...

Your website reminds me of one of thoughs old mario games, I donknow why maybe it just has a some what retro look. Anyway go to some of the sites Myoto suggested and get ideas from there.

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#16 mattyK

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 03:34 PM

my eyes! my precious precious eyes! :wacko:

#17 Evolution68

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 03:50 PM

New design
http://img162.images...=bbettermb3.png
ill keep going until you like it

#18 mattyK

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 05:04 PM

your graphics are too bold, and your fonts are too big. I don't even really know what to say to be honest.

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 06:18 PM

i agree with mattyk. Try adding more detail and follow some of p2l's website making tutorials.

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Posted 14 October 2006 - 07:23 PM

are you using a 800x600 resolution? the font and the graphs are way too big.. after so many people telling you the same, you should change it a bit.. Go with Myoto's recommendation and have a look at other sites, get inspired "don't rip" and have a try. :rolleyes:

Good Luck :doh:




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