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#1 Chrypetex

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 01:57 PM

I've been working on a portfolio for a while, and it recently got finished.
So i think what do you think about it? What should get better?

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 02:28 PM

Please, But please, get rid of the text-align=center; Sorry, I really don't like sites that they text is in the center. Simply doesn't look good to me. Anyway, not a bad design, well, the navigation and the logo are the only design there. Try for the nav, instead of underline, make a background color, would be much better. Umm, Other than that, nothing I can really say.

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 02:34 PM

Gotta agree on the centered text.. just doesn't look natural.

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 02:35 PM

But it looks strange if the text isn't in center.

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 02:45 PM

It is a little basic for my liking, but I cant really see anything that i drastically don't like. Maybe the centered text isn't right, try justifying it?

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 03:17 PM

What do you mean then? Where should i have it?

Please, But please, get rid of the text-align=center; Sorry, I really don't like sites that they text is in the center. Simply doesn't look good to me. Anyway, not a bad design, well, the navigation and the logo are the only design there. Try for the nav, instead of underline, make a background color, would be much better. Umm, Other than that, nothing I can really say.


Do you mean that i should switch to colors for the rollovers instead of underlines?

Edited by Chrypetex, 10 March 2007 - 03:20 PM.


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Posted 10 March 2007 - 03:46 PM

What do you mean then? Where should i have it?

Please, But please, get rid of the text-align=center; Sorry, I really don't like sites that they text is in the center. Simply doesn't look good to me. Anyway, not a bad design, well, the navigation and the logo are the only design there. Try for the nav, instead of underline, make a background color, would be much better. Umm, Other than that, nothing I can really say.


Do you mean that i should switch to colors for the rollovers instead of underlines?



Ok, by chance I got my blog as an example. Look in the navigation, it has the same style type thingy you got, the background changed and there are no underline on rollovers. Getting me buddy? And the Text wouldnt look weird if it normal, believe me, try it, and let us know for the update. would like to see changed. B)

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 03:54 PM

What do you mean then? Where should i have it?

Please, But please, get rid of the text-align=center; Sorry, I really don't like sites that they text is in the center. Simply doesn't look good to me. Anyway, not a bad design, well, the navigation and the logo are the only design there. Try for the nav, instead of underline, make a background color, would be much better. Umm, Other than that, nothing I can really say.


Do you mean that i should switch to colors for the rollovers instead of underlines?



Ok, by chance I got my blog as an example. Look in the navigation, it has the same style type thingy you got, the background changed and there are no underline on rollovers. Getting me buddy? And the Text wouldnt look weird if it normal, believe me, try it, and let us know for the update. would like to see changed. ;)


You've got cool rollovers :(
I think i can try one thing on how to do those ^^
I'll fix the text tomorrow, my brother needs to sleep now B)


EDIT: You guys were right! It looks better without center! Thanks :)
Just menu left now :)

Edited by Chrypetex, 10 March 2007 - 04:22 PM.


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Posted 10 March 2007 - 05:15 PM

Looks better the text now.

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 08:31 PM

8.9/10. I enjoy the colors quite a bit. 'Tis a simple and clean layout, and gets the job done. I don't however enjoy the text being so far to the right of the page. Maybe, as stated earlier, justify it or restrict it to the middle 50% of the width of the screen to give it some more unity.

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Posted 11 March 2007 - 03:38 AM

Saw this earlier, great work Max.

I said I liked it earlier on MSN But I will tell you now aswell ;)

Simple, Clean and very sexy.

I like it very much :)


Thanks! :)

8.9/10. I enjoy the colors quite a bit. 'Tis a simple and clean layout, and gets the job done. I don't however enjoy the text being so far to the right of the page. Maybe, as stated earlier, justify it or restrict it to the middle 50% of the width of the screen to give it some more unity.


What do you mean?

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Posted 12 March 2007 - 08:33 AM

What he means is to have a container div and set it's width to 50%, then use margin: 0 auto; to set it straight in the middle.

It's a pretty simple portfolio. Maybe a bit too simple for my tastes.

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Posted 12 March 2007 - 09:16 AM

Okay, thanks for feedback! :P

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Posted 12 March 2007 - 05:07 PM

I like it, but the only thing I think you should add to it is rollover effects on the links.
It will improove the navigation and will give a professional look to the website.

My opinion.

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Posted 13 March 2007 - 06:14 AM

I have a rollover on the navigation :S

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Posted 13 March 2007 - 11:49 AM

Oh, now I see it
Yesterday I didn't realize that your website had one

The text seem out of place now, its a bit more to the right now
if you place it in the middle would be better

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Posted 14 March 2007 - 11:18 AM

Strange :S
For me it's in the middle.
So I dunno how to fix it :/

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Posted 18 March 2007 - 06:14 PM

first of all congrats on the nice looking site you've got and second of all thank you for erm well the thank you on your page :) much appreciated.

Oh and one more thing, was just browsing thrue your portfolio > photos and noticed that the first picture the royal flush ain't realy a royal flush all the cards have to be eithr hearts,crosses,diamnods or spades :)

Edited by knedl, 18 March 2007 - 06:18 PM.


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Posted 23 March 2007 - 01:19 PM

Thanks!
Yea, I've got some comments on that Royal Flush xD
But I'm kind of lazy to change it :P

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Posted 24 March 2007 - 04:49 AM

hehe no worries there mate, stuff like that does happen ^_^

Again congrats on the site and good luck to you in the future.

Greetings knedl.




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