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[mindwin]

Here is my another work. A hall room interior scene.
Fully textured, and tuned.



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[SHIVMOO]

looks nice, need bigger pic.
like these
http://files.myopera...tos/hall_01.jpg
http://files.myopera...tos/hall_02.jpg



Is the painting on the wall meant to be going through it? (pic 1 on the left)
also the rug looks a bit uniform, all of the little bits of fluff are sticking straight up.
I think the mug on the glass table needs a bit more shadow and a reflection as it looks really strange atm.

The sofa's look nice but looks a bit floaty on the carpet.
The lights on the ceiling don't look like they are responsible for the light cast on the wall, because there is no light cast anywhere except the wall from them.

omg i the chandelier looks like an umbrella thats been shredded

Edited by SHIVMOO, 17 November 2008 - 11:17 AM.

[SebLev]

I agree with Shiv on the rug and the lights on the wall.... other then that it's really nice... I was actually looking at this on another forum a couple days ago... I also like the light on the ceiling! nice design... only real crit would be that the couches and pillows look too stiff...

Great job, I want to see more!