Please could you critique my site
Fresh Web Design
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Please review my site
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, Oct 07 2009 07:22 AM
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Posted 01 November 2009 - 02:11 PM
Overall the site is obviously very good. Just a few points that came to me.
First, the main text area on the home page could look better. The bulletpoints don't seem to be a good focus point, nor does the call to action for the free webdesign.
The main body of text could be simplified in 1 tittle with bulletpoints. (ticks seem to convert better then bullets I have been told)
Also your home page has 3 different menu options the top menu, the side menu and the middle menu. I think you could try and get more above the fold by simplifying the side menu.
On your call to action page, the graphics of the free sticker aren't perfect if you look at the letters of "free".
Like your site a lot, hope these points help. Good work
First, the main text area on the home page could look better. The bulletpoints don't seem to be a good focus point, nor does the call to action for the free webdesign.
The main body of text could be simplified in 1 tittle with bulletpoints. (ticks seem to convert better then bullets I have been told)
Also your home page has 3 different menu options the top menu, the side menu and the middle menu. I think you could try and get more above the fold by simplifying the side menu.
On your call to action page, the graphics of the free sticker aren't perfect if you look at the letters of "free".
Like your site a lot, hope these points help. Good work
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