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#1 xXx-Treme

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Posted 28 November 2010 - 08:34 AM

Hey guys!
I have been working on a new website for Estonian Parkour & Freerunning association. And I am stuck at the logo for website. Here is what I've come up with. It is on the same gradient background as it is going to be on website... It is missing something and I am unable to find out what. Can someone give me some advice on making this logo more attractive? Any wild ideas welcome :)

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Posted 27 January 2011 - 02:40 PM

I'm surprised no one has commented on this yet.

This is my opinion, and I'll admit, I'm no professional. The one thing that bothers me is your second line: "Eesti Parkour" and the font treatment you decided to use. I don't think it compliments the "EPK" like it should. Using the color red is a great idea, but something bothers me about that type of font. Try something smaller in size, but thicker characters. While changing the size, you could even expand the character spacing the smaller you go so the entire statement fills up that line.

Again, that's just my opinion.




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