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[Rainman]

guys and girl,

My first Artwork post here at Pixel2Life. So be gentle.

I never thought I'd actually finish this one some day. Still not quite finished yet... but enough to post it on a forum.
Everything (3D model and texturing) has been done in Swift3D. Except of course the little composition I made.

I've spent quite some time on this one. Started modeling a few months ago actually. But when I got to modeling the hair and the texturing I put it in a closet somewhere and forgot about it. A few days ago I was trying out some stuff with Swift3D (posing, texturing, etc.) and found a good "new method" to apply a face-texture to a model. So when I got it to fit on this one, I decided to model the hair too, to finish it.

Here are my results:

[SHIVMOO]

awesome!!
can i have a side view so i can see the rest...

nice texturing... i like the skin allot... but for some reason she looks like a man to me... theres something somewhere i dont know what it is but it makes her look like a man....

i really like the model


never really tried moddeling a head, must try that sometime without using zbrush...
it always looked so dam time consuming... how long did this take???

+ are you going to enter the 3d competition thing ???
the more the merrier

[funkysoul]

Good job!

I agree with Shivmoo, there is something weird about it.. Maybe the eyes? I'm not sure..

[Jag]

Very nice
Yeah, I agree with the eyes.

[adam123]

Very nice. For the eyes, maybe try closing them slightly, so it doesn't look like she's staring intently.

[ThaBirdman]

^^^^i agree, close the eyes a bit, and maybe soften up er jawline/chin...the rest looks great! (though maybe the skin is a wee bit pale but ott is is VERY good!

[Jamie Huskisson]

nice

if you can write tutorials you should look at applying for twodded tutorial staff for p2l

[alexames]

Cool, i aint seen any modeling done like that before.

[Eruption]

Try and make it look like she has makeup on.

[Andy]

VERY impressive! But no matter how much swift-surgery you give her, she still isn't my cup of tea

That's actaully amazing though, i didn't know rendering programs could be so presice(sp)

[ronson]

For what it is, i think it looks brilliant, as for looking like her, it doesn't but 10/10 for what it is, that's ace!

[Trinity]

^^^^i agree, close the eyes a bit, and maybe soften up er jawline/chin...the rest looks great! (though maybe the skin is a wee bit pale but ott is is VERY good!

I would agree,

The chin is a little bit too large and the jaw needs to be a little less proeminant. Other than that, it is really cool.

Trinity

[Silent Chaos]

that looks amazing! the only thing i notice is the eyes look high up and the face a bit to long

[Apache]

Lookin good you can actually c its here

[Jeepinator]

thats awesome. how long did it take oyu? oh and about the eyes, she looks cross eyed lol.

[Donna]

Hi Rainman

Nice work, read through all the comments and to me the eyes look fine as they are she has a look of being scared/surprised.

Its the chin and upto the cheek bones that looks very male.

Awesome first attempt too

[komaci-zen]

Thats really, really good work man. Keep it up!

[artzfx]

Considering this type of creation was probably not considered possible by the Swift 3D v4.5 programmers, this is simply an awesome piece of Swift 3D work... and I believe the first time someone has achieved such realism on a Swift Advanced Modeler generated character.

Kudos...

As far as the critiques above go... I'll put my vote with Donna's.

[Rainman]

Wow, thanks for all the replies people! I was a little surprised at that.

I've read all the comments and made some adjustments according those comments (when I thought they were valid comments).

Scaled down the eyes, changed the chin, scaled the head, applied different bitmaps so the hairline looks better now and changed the skincolor a bit.

I hope you like the new model a bit better.