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#1 Jaymz

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 10:44 AM

I'd like some feedback if possible on a new template I've done. I decided DBJ needed a bit more life so a new template was in order. I've moved from the flat colors to a little bit of depth, but I've tried to keep the original colors as much as possible. Thank you much :)

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 02:58 PM

It's nice clean and pro!

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 03:33 PM

It's nice clean and pro!

Thank you, that's what I was going for :)

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 07:12 PM

i know i'm normally a fan of your work jaymz, but i really dont like that layout...

the font for most of it is too big, i know your going for usuability etc. but you might wanna scale it down

also, why an orange+dark blue logo if its a pale light blue/white website?

just a few things for you to look at <3

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 07:46 PM

Very well designed, but the alternating colors aren't the best and the whole layout is kind of... generic. Like it just looks like a lot of the other sites out on the 'net. But other than that, it looks great.

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 08:59 PM

Not quit my style. But good work :)

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 09:04 PM

This was more of an experiment, I doubt I'll use it myself... It'll most likely just be a portfolio piece :)

Jay, I know there's something off about this one, it's not quite to my tastes either... I'm thinking I'll make one that's a little more bright with more of a modern twist ;)

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Posted 19 June 2005 - 09:19 PM

Its decent but the text is to large and even to put into your portfolio its a bit plain. Might appeal to someone.

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 02:50 AM

nice colour of blue and it does look clean. but im not a fan of it really, doesnt look right.

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 04:22 AM

i like it but i prefer your current one

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 05:22 AM

well im not the best web designer as u could prob tell frm my web site but i like that design nice clean simple allthough the font size could be adjusted to make it look more smarter.

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 09:12 AM

nice, very clean ;)

8/10 :P

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 09:16 AM

Nice and clean, that a good looking design. Good Work :lol:

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 10:51 AM

I like the layout but that blue border around the whole thing looks kind of out of place.
I prefer you current design more.

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 10:56 AM

I prefer you current design more.

I'm keeping it :lol:

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 10:59 AM

I prefer you current design more.

I'm keeping it ;)

Good :lol:

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 03:49 PM

man thx for the insparation!
Making lots of templates for dudes now and this one is realy nice clean look!
looks awsome dude!

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 04:57 PM

Im not really liking it...

you should stick with your current..which you seem to be doing.

#19 Jaymz

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Posted 20 June 2005 - 07:20 PM

Update:

I've created a new template, and despite the advice of everyone I spoke to, have changed the color scheme. I love the new scheme that includes both neutrals and a splash of color to invigorate the senses.

At the moment I'm stuck as to what to do with the two content boxes, but I'm sure I'll find something to fill them. I'm really liking the new layout which maintains the clean style that I prefer, but has a more modern feel to it.

Let me know what you think, the file is in PNG form because without slicing some of the gradients were choppy when the quality was reduced, so it's about 185kb.

Edit: I'm aware that the watermark in the very top left isn't centered properly in the bar, I've fixed it but don't see the point in uploading a new image for such a minor change :rolleyes:

Link: http://blogs.twodded...orage/dbjv5.png

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Posted 21 June 2005 - 01:47 AM

I like that, very nice :unsure:
Although, the copyright text on the bottom is a little hard to read.




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