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#1 Vstyle

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Posted 31 December 2005 - 07:36 PM

http://vdesigns.chumhost.com

I finally got around to working on this after having the web space for quite a bit... I still don't have all my artwork up and it seems a bit overly simplistic to me. Any critique is welcome.

#2 Wybe

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Posted 01 January 2006 - 09:04 AM

You should remove the "best viewed at 1280x1024 in Mozilla Firefox" line. Your site can be viewed in multiple resolutions, with more browsers (if it doesn't display corectly, it's the webmasters fault), and nobody is going to change his/her screen resolution for a website anyway :) Also, you should just try the site without the solid black borders everywhere, it might look better! Or you could try to change the colour of em or something, right now they're a little distracting.

I like yourt vector art, keep up the good work!

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Posted 01 January 2006 - 02:52 PM

You should try to code the layout yourself instead of using imageready. Also, all its all images, no text whatsoever.

In my eyes, your more of a designer than a coder :angry:

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Posted 02 January 2006 - 05:49 AM

I only have one comment, and thats on the text you have on your main home page, you should never write "fianlly finished" on a web design page, it makes it look like you take forever to finish a project and un-professional... Site looks nice though :)

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Posted 02 January 2006 - 07:29 AM

kinda minimalistic site, I like it :)
Maybe you can get your navigation a bit better, so that people can jump from any location to whatever they want to see, and maybe open your work in a pop-up window, instead of opening it in the same page..

Nice vectors, I like your "N" logo ;)

Edited by funkysoul, 02 January 2006 - 07:30 AM.


#6 Vstyle

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Posted 02 January 2006 - 02:38 PM

Thanks all. And yeah, I'm definitely more of a designer than a coder, I'm currently learning HTML so I thought it'd just be safer to ImageReady it.

#7 VRMONEY

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 02:52 PM

Very cool, but I think you should add some actual text rather than all images, it saves loadtimes, and it is easyer to update.

#8 Vstyle

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Posted 08 January 2006 - 04:20 PM

Yeah, i tried for like 2 hours, but for some reason things kept going wrong x.x So I just put it on the images until I can fix it.

Edited by Vstyle, 08 January 2006 - 04:21 PM.


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Posted 08 January 2006 - 10:26 PM

follow Fakens slice guide and you be able to figure out how to make the content boxes

http://www.slicingguide.com/

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#10 Good4D4ys

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Posted 21 January 2006 - 05:23 AM

Everything look's good. I like your vector art in portofolio.
So far all link works normal. Always Keep Fresh your web !




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