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#1 MAdEinUK1

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Posted 12 February 2006 - 06:12 PM

Hey all,

Please give me some feedback on my new site im making.

http://k.1asphost.co...fessional3.html

It is in early stages of design atm so it looks very empty.

Dave -)

#2 Donna

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Posted 12 February 2006 - 06:41 PM

Change:

scroll=no

To

scroll=yes

I only see 2/3rds of your site, why are you removing the scroll?

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Posted 12 February 2006 - 07:49 PM

I don't like the colors.

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Posted 12 February 2006 - 11:07 PM

hmmm. Its a nice concept. I think the intro animation is a little slow, and the radial gradient looks kinda wierd against the grey background. maybe adding some sort of border would help? And for my taste, the button animations are a little crazy. Im curios to see how the full site is gonna look like

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 10:00 AM

could use a pre-loader, so that i know how long i have to wait and i know its just not a blank page.

-Devyn

edit: Im at home now with my Fast interet and it loaded no problem looks cool. But when i was at school with the slow internet i couldnt load it. it took forever

Edited by Clandestine, 13 February 2006 - 03:42 PM.


#6 MAdEinUK1

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Posted 13 February 2006 - 05:36 PM

Thanks, appreciate the feedback people.

Ive changed the colours to blue. Looks way better.

I dont make the preloader til half way through the production of the site.

I have more of an idea by that stage.

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Posted 15 February 2006 - 08:35 PM

Wouldn't load at all for me. I'm using firefox. Ah, well.

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Posted 15 February 2006 - 11:42 PM

good to know im not the only one, ive been on there a few times trying to look and nothing ever seems to happen when i click on the buttons after the intro... thought it was just me...

anyways, as far as i have got, id lose the sound on the intro, you nearly deafened me while i was listening to music and clicked on it (second time in three days your site has nearly diabled me/woken the whole house up :D )

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Posted 16 February 2006 - 06:13 AM

ALl in all I like it.. The buttons are quite hectic, but still a groovy animation.
I agree with the border option.
Perhaps a "SKIP" the intro option...

#10 c-c-C-C-UNIT

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Posted 16 February 2006 - 10:10 PM

I just get a gray screen. Yay for accessibility! :\

#11 MAdEinUK1

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Posted 18 February 2006 - 07:53 AM

lol, ok.

For those not being able to view the site at all will be due to you not having the Flash 9 Player.

I have started anew on a site. I wanted to create something different from everybody else. Il will keep you noticed on when it will be ready for the first stages of critisism.

lol, ok.

For those not being able to view the site at all will be due to you not having the Flash 9 Player.

I have started anew on a site. I wanted to create something different from everybody else. Il will keep you noticed on when it will be ready for the first stages of critisism.



FFS, sorry. I mean the Flash 8 player

#12 DanWilliamson

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Posted 18 February 2006 - 06:56 PM

Hey,

Your links go nowhere?? I have flash 8 player.

- Dan

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Posted 19 February 2006 - 09:30 AM

Whoa wicked flash man.I like the way when I click enter,the letters start jumping and fading,thats original and I was shocked on how cool that was.

Ummm heres a small bad thing though,when I clicked on something,it wouldnt take me to any place.

Overall,I loved your flash layout. 8/10

Good work :)

#14 MAdEinUK1

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Posted 21 February 2006 - 02:25 AM

Thanks, I didnt get to the stage of adding more stuff to the site. Ive started on a different site. Il put the first layout of it on here soon.

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Posted 21 February 2006 - 11:02 AM

Nice design, don't like the colours though

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Posted 22 February 2006 - 12:51 PM

why make a splash page in flash, that says that you need flash? think about that for a second...

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Posted 23 February 2006 - 11:52 AM

The flash intro is too long = too boring.
Good efforts tough! :blush:

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Posted 23 February 2006 - 12:24 PM

anyways, as far as i have got, id lose the sound on the intro, you nearly deafened me while i was listening to music and clicked on it


Yah...I just did the same thing, I would have to agree on that one. And it just ends abruptly, anyways, which imo, makes it sound a little tacky.

why make a splash page in flash, that says that you need flash? think about that for a second...


Maybe you could make it so that if the .swf loads up, it sends you to a new .html document with your entire flash site in it. set a 5 second or so meta refresh on the first page...that way if the .swf doesnt load (and therefor you dont get sent to the other .html page) it can send you to a link to download Flash 8.

Just an idea as to why it might be done that way... *shrug*

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 12:23 PM

why make a splash page in flash, that says that you need flash? think about that for a second...



As I said earlier, this is a very early stage of the site development. I am going to have that as the HTML page with the requirents, and when the user clicks enter site it then animates into the flash movie.

I have also started to remake the into.

Change:

scroll=no

To

scroll=yes

I only see 2/3rds of your site, why are you removing the scroll?


It did say on the site requirment you need 1280x768. I take it your resoloution is 800x600?

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 12:36 PM

why make a splash page in flash, that says that you need flash? think about that for a second...



As I said earlier, this is a very early stage of the site development. I am going to have that as the HTML page with the requirents, and when the user clicks enter site it then animates into the flash movie.

I have also started to remake the into.

Change:

scroll=no

To

scroll=yes

I only see 2/3rds of your site, why are you removing the scroll?


It did say on the site requirment you need 1280x768. I take it your resoloution is 800x600?


No actually I'm on 1024x768

and btw

For those not being able to view the site at all will be due to you not having the Flash 9 Player.


There is no such thing as Flash Player 9 :huh: It's your code that's why it's not working in firefox.

Search the forums as I have put up the correct code to work in all browsers before.




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