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#1 Pooch

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Posted 14 April 2006 - 08:20 PM

What do you guys think of my layout so far: My Layout
I was hoping someone could give me an idea of what I should use for content box(es). What else should I add/change?

#2 BeaverElfeater

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 12:18 AM

looks good, i would really try to incorporate a color in there, maybe a blue, or a red, because an all greyscale layout would really take away from its pwnness

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#3 coolaid

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 03:22 AM

ooh, very nice. i would suggest making links orange (for color), it'd probably look best.

for suggestions on what to add, i would personally make a line a content/menu seperator, then use plan css rollover menu's and keep things simple, dont add a content box to hold text :D but thats what i would do.

looks really good so far

#4 Wybe

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 05:14 AM

Well, nice start but yuou really should try to put in some more work for the area where the actual contents goes (or where I suspect it will be, in the middle). Else, your footer will look nicer than your contents and it's not gonna appeal to anybody, that will suck. There's no way to be nice about that.

Anyway, keep up the good work and good luck.

#5 DanWilliamson

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 05:39 AM

Beautiful but I would add a border around the side of the content so it looks a bit better.

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 10:05 AM

Very good, something about the title's text though, maybe the font or it's not smooth enough or maybe its not crisp enough, I can't really lay a finger on that but something about it bothers me. Otherwise, I think it's great.

#7 Bryn

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Posted 15 April 2006 - 06:00 PM

alright, cant say much until you add more.

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Posted 16 April 2006 - 07:16 AM

Looking good so far although I would suggest some colour or something as it is missing something but I am not sure what. Maybe it will be clearer when you add to it :P

#9 Dtrigger

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Posted 17 April 2006 - 12:47 PM

very good ! like it alot ! niice

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Posted 20 April 2006 - 06:32 AM

Maybe adding a Dark Blue or even a Light-ish blue;
Blue: 00adef
Thats the Blue code what looks nice maybe adding some Orange too, also you could add a nice Background colour, So it gets the viewers eyes.

#11 Hoot

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Posted 20 April 2006 - 12:32 PM

Looks really good very nice design, cant wait to see the content boxes added :tiphat:

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Posted 20 April 2006 - 06:35 PM

I'd try making the rest with CSS. Looks like you could pull off some really nice designs with that.

Can't wait to see more.




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